Please answer my questions : )

I carefully made below passages please check if it's ok or not and I put 2 options in red. which one would be better?



1. Describe a typical meal you would have for dinner.


A. I usually eat rice, side dishes and Korean-style stew for dinner. Side dishes are made from various vegetables which always include Kimch. For stew, It normally includes pork, chicken, beef or fish. I usually eat at home so my mother cooks dinner for me.


2. What is the most important feature you look for in a shoe?


A. The most important feature I look for in a shoe is whether it is comfortable. Because I walk a lot so I need comfortable shoes. If my shoes are not comfortable, then it affects what I can do that day./my day. For example, I went shopping wearing small sized shoes. But it hurt so much that I had to come back home early. / But my feet hurt so much so I had to come back home early.


3. What are some advantages and disadvantages of using public transportation?


A. The advantage of using public transportation is that it is cheap. Driving my own car is expensive, but it only costs 1dollar to take a bus./but buses are just 1dollar. However, they are/it is very slow, because they/the bus has/have to stop at many bus stops so it takes a lot of time. But in my opinon/But I think it is better to use public transportation.


4. What is the most important feature you look for in furniture?


A. The most important feature I look for in furniture is whether it is comfortable. Because I use it everyday, but if it is not comfortable, I won't use it. For example, I bought a chair last year because I like the design, but since the chair was uncomfortable, I didn't use it. So I learned that it is important to buy comfortable furniture.


5. What is the most important thing you consider when buying a toy?


A. The most important thing I consider when buying a toy is the safety of the toy. Because children can do anything with a toy. For example, last year, my cousin swallowed a toy so he had to go to the hospital. So I think the safety of the toy is the most important thing / the priority when buying a toy.


6. What are some advantages and disadvantages of using a credit card?


A. The advantage of using of using a credit card is that you can buy things you need when you don't have cash. So you don't have to go to the bank to withdraw cash. But it's easier to buy unnecessary things on impulse because you can use it anytime so you would spend more money. Therefore, it will be/is a great idea to make limitation on a credit card.


7. What are some advantages and disadvantages of drinking bottled water?


A. The advantage of drinking bottled water is that it is easier to carry around. So you can just fill out water into the/a water bottle. However, there could be unsanitary things in that bottle. Because if you use it for long time, the bottle will be dirty. So in my opinion/Therefore, it is/will be good/great idea to change the water bottle as often as possible/quite often.