Please advise me on Ielts Wring Task 1. Thanks in advance.

The table below shows the worldwide market share of the notebook computer market for manufacturers in the years 2006 and 2007.

Write at least 150 words.

Company	2006 % Market Share	2007 % Market Share
HP	31.4	34
Dell	16.6	20.2
Acer	11.6	10.7
Toshiba	6.2	7.3
Lenovo	6.6	6.2
Fujitsu-Siemens	4.8	2.3
Others	22.8	19.3
Total	100	100

The table data compares the percentage of laptops sold over the world by companies between 2006 and 2007.

It is clear that HP was the best selling brand in both years. Fujitsu-Siemens had the smallest proportion of notebook computers market share.

Now, turning to the details, while the figures for HP company, Dell company and Toshiba company rose moderately, the market share of Acer, Lenovo and Fujitsu-Siemens saw gradual decreases. Having the fourth rank in 2006, Lenovo, by 2017, had exchanged the ranking with Toshiba, which reached the fifth rank in the previous year.

HP remained the market leader role during 2 years, at 31.4% and 34% respectively. By contrast, Fujitsu-Siemens account for insignificant minorities, at 4.8% in 2006 and went down to 2.3% in 2007. Dell was the corporation which had the largest increase in market share, rose by almost 4% after a year. Toshiba and Lenovo had negligible shifts over the period of two years.