Please advise me if the sentences below are grammatically worded

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The above order was cancelled and is being in the stock of project balance items.

As the process of adding all the useful items to the stock from the remaining stock, we checked the above item and have found that the triangular crystal glass rod supplied less than the quantity required.

We require 1800 crystal glass rods for four chandeliers but they supplied only 1200 pieces, so we are now short of 600 crystal glass rods.

As per the information received from the procurement department, the order was for both supply and installation so, we haven't opened and inspected the items at that time of shipment receipt.

Teechr · Accepted Answer

anonymousThe above order was cancelled and is being in the stock of project balance items.As the process of adding all the useful items to the stock from the remaining stock, we checked the above item and have found that the triangular crystal glass rod supplied less than the quantity required. We require 1800 crystal glass rods for four chandeliers but they supplied only 1200 pieces, so we are now short of 600 crystal glass rods.As per the information received from the procurement department, the order was for both supply and installation so, we haven't opened and inspected the items at that time of shipment receipt.

The highlighted parts are unclear. Can you rephrase them?

Teechr · Answer

Thank you for helping me to correct my sentences.

We purchased four chandeliers for one of our projects. Due to the design changes and the client's rejection, we didn't use any of ~~these~~ those chandeliers, and decided to add them to our stock for future use for any of our projects. Since the order was for both supply and installation, we didn't open and inspect the items at that time of ~~the~~ receiving the order ~~receipt~~ because the supplier's technicians were already there to install them at the site as per our program, but later, the items were cancelled and rejected.

Please have look at my sentences and advise me if they are worded grammatically. ~~correct.~~

As the design changed, the above order was cancelled and the items were moved to the stock of ~~project~~ unused project items.

As During the process of ~~shifting of~~ moving all the unused items ~~(useful for future project)~~ from the stock of all ~~project~~ unused project items to our stock inventory, we checked the above item and ~~have~~ found that the triangular crystal glass rods supplied were ~~less~~ fewer than the quantity required. We require 1,800 crystal glass rods for four chandeliers, but they supplied only 1,200 pieces, so we are now short of 600 crystal glass rods.

Since the order was for both supply and installation, we didn't open and inspect the items at that time of the order receipt, so please ask the supplier to supply the missing rods immediately.

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The above order was cancelled, and ~~is being in~~ the items will be added to the stock of project balance items.

As During the process of adding all the ~~useful~~ usable items to the stock, ~~from the remaining stock,~~ we checked the above item and have found that the number of triangular crystal glass rods supplied was less than the quantity required.

We require 1,800 crystal glass rods for four chandeliers, but they supplied only 1,200 pieces, so we are now short of 600 crystal glass rods.

As per the information received from the procurement department, the order was for both supply and installation so, we ~~haven't opened and inspected~~ did not open and inspect the items at that time of receipt of shipment. ~~receipt.~~

Please advise me if the sentences below are grammatically worded

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