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Upon inspection, all candles were found to be damaged. It was due to high temperature in the container. The wax softened and started to melt at high temperature.
It seems that the candles were packed together so they melted into each other, and some candles were found damaged, with packing paper marks impressed on its body.
In order to prevent this damage during the transit, always use express shipping and advise the supplier to use appropriate packing for shipping of this kind of delicated items.
Also, the wooden furniture were also found to be damaged with black molds and odour smells. It may be due to container moisture damage or left package inadvertent exposure to rain at the port.
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Upon inspection, all candles were found to be damaged. It was due to the high temperature in the container. The wax had softened and started to melt.
- Upon inspection, all candles were found to be damaged.
- It was due to the high temperature in the container.
- The wax had softened and started to melt.
- at high temperature.
- It seems that the candles were packed so closely together that they fused together and on some of them the melted into each other , and some candles were found damaged, with packing paper marks were impressed on the surface.
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Upon inspection, all candles were found to be damaged. It was due to the high temperature in the container. The wax had softened and started to melt. at high temperature.
It seems that the candles were packed so closely together that they fused together and on some of them the melted into each other, and some candles were foun
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