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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
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Dear Miko,
We have already check the documents but we found a big error all pages, Do you check the document before send them to us? and last time we inform you that your address on the B/L don't correct why don't you revised it? Please revise all document the follow ;
1.Invoice 130909DRT
-Please remove the same words on item Shipped to on the Commercial Invoice.
-Please put FAO Zone on the Commercial Invoice and Packing List.
-Please put the container no, seal no. on Packing List.
-Please revised your address on B/L (from MNATO-KU to MINATO-KU).
-On document in Japanese version, the vessel arrive in Songkhla around 25 September but why do you send the draft document to us this time?
We need the Certificate of Origin and H/C for import process. Kindly provie and send them to us.
Best Regards,
Jane
We have already check the documents but we found a big error all pages, Do you check the document before send them to us? and last time we inform you that your address on the B/L don't correct why don't you revised it? Please revise all document the follow ;
1.Invoice 130909DRT
-Please remove the same words on item Shipped to on the Commercial Invoice.
-Please put FAO Zone on the Commercial Invoice and Packing List.
-Please put the container no, seal no. on Packing List.
-Please revised your address on B/L (from MNATO-KU to MINATO-KU).
-On document in Japanese version, the vessel arrive in Songkhla around 25 September but why do you send the draft document to us this time?
We need the Certificate of Origin and H/C for import process. Kindly provie and send them to us.
Best Regards,
Jane
Top answer
In some places your version is unclear or ambiguous. If my suggestions do not express what you meant please let me know and I'll try again. We have already check ed the documents but and we found a big significant error s on all the pages, Do you check the document s before send ing them to us?
- In some places your version is unclear or ambiguous.
- If my suggestions do not express what you meant please let me know and I'll try again.
- We have already check ed the documents but and we found a big significant error s on all the pages, Do you check the document s before send ing them to us?
- and L ast time we inform ed you that your address on the B/L don't correct was incorrect .
- W hy don't haven't you revised it?
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In some places your version is unclear or ambiguous. If my suggestions do not express what you meant please let me know and I'll try again.
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Thank you very much. For Japanese document, I can't read it but it put date of vessel arriving on september, 25 but the supplier sent the document after the vessel arrived.
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How about this:
The Japanese version of the documents shows the arrival date of the ship as September 25, so why did you not send the documents sooner?
The Japanese version of the documents shows the arrival date of the ship as September 25, so why did you not send the documents sooner?
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Thanks. I have on question; Did or do you forget to send the document to us?
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Did you forget to send the document to us? (You are asking for an explanation of something that happened in the past.)
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