Please advise correct sentense
"Please find forwarding you the email received form the subject staff regarding his sickness for your update"
"Please see below the email received from the subject mentioned staff regarding his sickness for your update"
"Please see below the email received from the subject mentioned staff regarding his sickness.
This is for your update"
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These are all so wordy and indirect that they sound a bit silly in my opinion. I suggest eg Please update James Smith's records regarding his absence due to sickness. Details are in this email.
- These are all so wordy and indirect that they sound a bit silly in my opinion.
- I suggest eg Please update James Smith's records regarding his absence due to sickness.
- Details are in this email.
- The staff are all the people who work there.
- Each individual person is 'a staff member ' or 'a member of the staff'.
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These are all so wordy and indirect that they sound a bit silly in my opinion.
I suggest eg Please update James Smith's records regarding his absence due to sickness. Details are in this email.
The staff are all the people who work there. Each individual person is 'a staff member' or 'a member of the staff'.
0The writer is trying awfully hard to be formal, but it ends up being ridiculously indecipherable.
Write clearly, simply and directly so the recipient can figure out what you mean..
Mr. Manju Agarwal sent me the following email on the subject of his recent illness. Please update his file accordingly.
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