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Shahnaz Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing

Please adding piunctuation and capital letters as necessary:

When I was a boy I was very interested in insects birds reptiles and all sports of animals one wet windy winter afternoon I went bird watching on a flat muddy stretch of coast the tide was coming in fast and I was about to leave the beach when I came across the footmarks of a small group of animals what were they I looked along the trail of footmarks but they soon disappeared under the rapidly incoming tide but what was that a few yards along the trail form where I stood I saw a small object struggling in the mud what was it I went quickly over to it good heavens a pig it was a tiny shivering black piglet which had obviously been left behind in the mud by its mother and the other piglets it sneezed shivered and sneezed again I picked it up rapped it in my anorak and carried it home in the basket of my bicycle that shivering piglet turned out to be one of the most intelligent affectionate pets I ever had .
  

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Hey, we don't do that, shahnaz! What do you think we are, some kind of 'fast punctuation' drive-through shop? It's time for you to do a little work: add the punctuation yourself, post your revision here, and we'll check it for you if we have time.

  • Hey, we don't do that, shahnaz!
  • What do you think we are, some kind of 'fast punctuation' drive-through shop?
  • It's time for you to do a little work: add the punctuation yourself, post your revision here, and we'll check it for you if we have time.
  • PS: If you're a boy, why is your avatar a girl?
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Hey, we don't do that, shahnaz! What do you think we are, some kind of 'fast punctuation' drive-through shop?

It's time for you to do a little work: add the punctuation yourself, post your revision here, and we'll check it for you if we have time.

PS: If you're a boy, why is your avatar a girl?
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Dear Mister Micawber,

I`m shahnaz and I`m a girl .I don`t know why you answered this question??? I dont see any reason to hide my originaly and sexuality. please be careful after that about your openions. you should respect to all of members in this site. maybe I have a little English proficiency and could not write and speak professional like you but I think this a a first rule in this
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Hello shahnaz,

Our forum will HELP you, but we don't do your work for you. This is one giant mass of words, without any attempt at separating this out into sentences.

If you make your own effort first, people are more than happy to help you.

Repost your paragraph with your best attempt at correct punctuation and capitalization. Then someone will look.

As for Mr.
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Dear Grammar Geek,

thanks alot for your answer. I respect to your comment. I did this work myself ,this was about a few last weeks. anyway thanks for your attention.

and about your point to my sentence that is said: "When I was a boy." This is just a sample text . and is not related to me. I wish we dont judge about others ,soon and just to a written sentence .

thank y

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