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Angel girl1 Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Please.. a small paragraph.

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Could you please correct this paragraph?

....During this period of time( I mean the Renaissance) , the modern world was born as Gutenberg perfected printing, Christopher Columbus discovered the Americas, Copernicus found that the earth revolved around the sun, Martin Luther founded a new religion, the use of the cannon ended chivalry, da Vinci created a new form of art and Shakespeare is no exception, he is referred to as a Renaissance writer, specifically an Elizabethan poet and playwright. Through his works he displays the Renaissance’s thoughts and concerns, especially his tragedy Hamlet.

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Hi, The part in red does not work.. During this period of time( I mean the Renaissance) , the modern world was born as Gutenberg perfected printing, Christopher Columbus discovered the Americas, Copernicus found that the earth revolved around the sun, Martin Luther founded a new religion, the use of the cannon ended chivalry, da Vinci created a new form of art and Shakespeare is no exception , he is referred to as a Renaissance writer, specifically an Elizabethan poet and playwright. Through his works he displays the Renaissance’s thoughts and concerns, especially his tragedy Hamlet.

  • Hi, The part in red does not work..
  • During this period of time( I mean the Renaissance) , the modern world was born as Gutenberg perfected printing, Christopher Columbus discovered the Americas, Copernicus found that the earth revolved around the sun, Martin Luther founded a new religion, the use of the cannon ended chivalry, da Vinci created a new form of art and Shakespeare is no exception , he is referred to as a Renaissance writer, specifically an Elizabethan poet and playwright.
  • Through his works he displays the Renaissance’s thoughts and concerns, especially his tragedy Hamlet.
  • During this period of time( I mean the Renaissance) , the modern world was born as Gutenberg perfected printing, Christopher Columbus discovered the Americas, Copernicus found that the earth revolved around the sun, Martin Luther founded a new religion, the use of the cannon ended chivalry, and da Vinci created a new form of art.
  • Shakespeare, too, was a part of this movement.
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Hi,
The part in red does not work..
....During this period of time( I mean the Renaissance) , the modern world was born as Gutenberg perfected printing, Christopher Columbus discovered the Americas, Copernicus found that the earth revolved around the sun, Martin Luther founded a new religion, the use of the cannon ended chivalry, da Vinci created a new f
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Thanks a lot, I appreciate your help.

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