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10101582 Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Please,
can you evaluate a very short essay for me? Don't evaluate literary value of the essay, just point on the mistakes. I wrote it for my friend's child. Her it is.
Reasons for breaking a friendship
In everyone’s life to have friends is very important. A true friendship is a real fortune.But, to have a true friendship is not so easy. In nowdays when people are facing with many their own problems, they often cannot establish a real friendship wit someone.
Just because that for me is so important to have friends in which I can have full confidence. I have just mentioned one of the reasons for breaking a friendship.Losing confidence, that is why many friendship couldn’t be continued. The next one is jealousy. If one of friends is jealous on the other’s success, it surely leads to the end of a friendship. Also, losing common interests can brings to this. So far, I had a such experience and some of my former friends disappointed me. Fortunately, I still have a few friends for which I believe that they are real ones. They are with me not only when everything go fine, they also support me when things go bad.
That helped me to realize that quality is more important than quantity. What I want to say? It’s better to have a few true friends, than a lot of them on which I can’t count always.
Reasons for breaking a friendship
In everyone’s life to have friends is very important. A true friendship is a real fortune.But, to have a true friendship is not so easy. In nowdays when people are facing with many their own problems, they often cannot establish a real friendship wit someone.
Just because that for me is so important to have friends in which I can have full confidence. I have just mentioned one of the reasons for breaking a friendship.Losing confidence, that is why many friendship couldn’t be continued. The next one is jealousy. If one of friends is jealous on the other’s success, it surely leads to the end of a friendship. Also, losing common interests can brings to this. So far, I had a such experience and some of my former friends disappointed me. Fortunately, I still have a few friends for which I believe that they are real ones. They are with me not only when everything go fine, they also support me when things go bad.
That helped me to realize that quality is more important than quantity. What I want to say? It’s better to have a few true friends, than a lot of them on which I can’t count always.
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I want to make sure I understand this properly -- you have written this TO your friend's child, to let him or her know that you are their true friend and they can count on you? That doesn't seem very likely, but I wanted to give the benefit of the doubt. Or is it that you have written this for that child to turn in to their teacher as work that the child is supposed to have done?
- I want to make sure I understand this properly -- you have written this TO your friend's child, to let him or her know that you are their true friend and they can count on you?
- That doesn't seem very likely, but I wanted to give the benefit of the doubt.
- Or is it that you have written this for that child to turn in to their teacher as work that the child is supposed to have done?
- Are we helping you write a touching letter to a child, or helping you teach a child that it's not important to do their own work?
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I want to make sure I understand this properly -- you have written this TO your friend's child, to let him or her know that you are their true friend and they can count on you? That doesn't seem very likely, but I wanted to give the benefit of the doubt.
Or is it that you have written this for that child to turn in to their teacher as work that the child is supposed to have done?
Or is it that you have written this for that child to turn in to their teacher as work that the child is supposed to have done?
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OK, sorry. I helped to my friend's child to write some short essay about reasons for breaking a friendship. Are there some more remarkable grramar mistakes or no, that is all. If you wanna to give the ansver-do it, don't give me the ethics lessons whether it OK or not.
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