0MY LIFE IN HISTROY . 02br 02br 00 I was born in Bangalore ,1983 but my family is from Malayalee . I grew up at 5 yrs old when I calls my Aunty inspired of my Mom . I and my aunty lived in Kerala , My mom was in Bangalore because of her office . I love my aunty as mom but i didnot know any mom in Bangalore . After 8 yrs old , I was more judicae sick and then i become deaf . My relatives shocked what happen to me who become deaf due high fever and jaudicae .. They were cried too become of me who was innocent boy. My parent met me bec of visiting me as deaf son , I cried that who are my parent but i want my aunty as mom .. I did not know where was my true mom . My parent took me to go to Bangalore as hometown . I leave my relatives in Kerala who love me so much .. Later days , I joined normal school when i had speak to normal friends who understand but i can't able to hear what did ones saying and things sound . My teacher scolded me who can't understand of her teaching and cried too much in class and classmates girls comforted me as baby and always with them . All girls helped me to write and speak and then help me in examination . I have got second place when teachers amazed at me but they were fool to unknow my examination . My dad took me to go for Hearing impaired Institution which help me to learn what did ones saying and thing sound . I wear hearing aids and then join deaf school in Bangalore . Deaf School's name is Sheila Kovthavala Institute for the deaf . I had improved for learning and drawing so much , when all teachers were so happy of my improvement and got first places from UKG TO 5 th grade as class . Suddenly I was naughty boy for all girls and show off myself as Number one in life .. Children were jealous of me a lot because of my successor daily .. and I had failed in 8 th grade as class after all teachers and my parent shocked at me because I fall in love with her and roamed in Bangalore for cinema . My romantic life grew up as new plant become big tree that 'd same way at me at 8 th grade .. My dad knew what was my feeling with other purpose . so and then My dad took me to stay in Deaf School St louis Institute for the deaf , Adyar in Chennai when i was very sad because of nothing girls in St Louis School and only boy . I forgot all romantic life and focus to study and got sport for match too much . I had won too prizes from Volley ball and Tennis Table .. I have got third place of National Table Tennis Champsion of the Deaf ... I passed in SSLC of Tamil Nadu Education in Chennai and got second class in SSLC . My family was so happy of my passed in SSLC . 02br 02br 00My parent thinks about my education in the future .. I asked my dad that I want to apply a degree of Fine Arts in Bangalore and begged Dad . Dad visited Chitra karnataka prakash of Fine Arts college in Bangalore , he satisfied with prinicple's discussion .. Suddenly Head officer of LIC asked my dad to took the best diploma in Mysore . and then asked me about diploma .. I refused it and hate it .. I want B.FA . My dad said me that many women wear half dress and dirty cloth and talks many boys in Chitra Karnataka Prakash of Fine Arts . I failed to answer at him because He know about me . I accpeted to get diploma college . and then studies in there but I had naught and bad boy and different situation , cheats and cunning both boys and girls .. They called us FOUR BOYS like Babu, Sai , Ricky and me . Four Boys were Bad boys . College students suffered . I have got very beatiful girl in our college , I asked her that Can i dating wit her ? she said me OK . They all amazed . One day ,.I talked girl so much , tommorrow i broke my girl friend who shocked and cried .. She forgive me .. She said me that I was nice in communication and cool and fun ..and Why did i change my mind of her ? I replied her that many boys were so jealous of me , and gossips in college about me . so that i fed up and then alone with Four boys as powerfully boys . She gifted me Card and pen . I felt gulity of her who had soft heart . She have got first place in Model and beauty feast . I forgot her at the immediately . Her parent visited me in college , suddenly time . I talked them so nice . . I troubled for ragging , rowdy and bad films so much ..and then i can't study and fight with enemy friends so much , Enemy friends has grow up in powerfully over FOUR BOYS . Ricky was so weak thinking , Babu was silence , Sai forgot all and me would go to bad film, and return in college Hostel . Enemy friends mocked me ..I was so angry of them and quarrel with them powerfully words and super insulting words . They were plot to ask Rowdy for me . I have got so tension , and then suicide to cut my hand . Four boys cried for me who was mad and brain off and they helped me to go for Hospital in Midnight and all girls cried of me . I went home for resting , My family and relatives came in my house and they cried so much and they said me I was fool and mad to near the death , my life was worthless . I was silence and sleep at home for one month . I returned to meet all girls and boys , they was so happy of my coming . i had failed in second year due i can't study in any time due so tension of enemy friends . FOUR BOYS fall down in weak place . I sitted at home for one year , I meet many deaf friends and learned Religion of The Family , and knew some things in Bible . I taught my old friend about Heaven and Hell .. he got scared of my teaching .. He asked Brother Anirban , who want to meet me in later . See to read next My wonderfully life .0-
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0You have a lot of problems with your basic grammar, especially with your verbs. g. I calls my Aunty inspired of my Mom.
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0You have a lot of problems with your basic grammar, especially with your verbs.
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I calls my Aunty inspired of my Mom.
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0You have a lot of problems with your basic grammar, especially with your verbs. e.g. I calls my Aunty inspired of my Mom. (I don't even know what you are trying to say there.)0-
Do you still need help editing your story? I know you posted it in March 2008 but I only saw it now. I live in Bangalore and am volunteering at SKID (the Sheila Kovthavala Institute for the Deaf. I am also learning Indian Sign Lanuage.
AnonymousDo you still need help editing your story? I know you posted it in March 2008 but I only saw it now. I live in Bangalore and am volunteering at SKID (the Sheila Kovthavala Institute for the Deaf. I am also learning Indian Sign Lanuage.
AnonymousDo you still need help editing your story? I know you posted it in March 2008 but I o