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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing

Pleas,correct my paragraph

The eat is important to stay for life ,just the healthy .as eat don't healthy causes problem in the health . because that a many of people have problem health ,also i am them . as i take breakfast late and sometime don't take .as well as at lunch . as dinner i eat a lot of food .that is hobbies for me bad . also ,i drink a lot of coffee every day and eat with that some cake and sweet and i drink tea after every meal .i prefer spicy food.that is becouced me pain in stomach. i hope to leave that is hobbies and follow a good diet.
  

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Hi Anon I am sorry to say but you have hardly any sentence which is grammatically correct. You should work on it more! Regards Nata....

  • Hi Anon I am sorry to say but you have hardly any sentence which is grammatically correct.
  • You should work on it more!
  • Regards Nata....
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Hi Anon

I am sorry to say but you have hardly any sentence which is grammatically correct.

You should work on it more!

Regards

Nata....

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