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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
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pleas help check the letter

0Could anyone give me a hand to check the letter? Thank you from the bottom of my heart.02br
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00Dear Sir/Madam,02br
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00I am a Chinese student who wishes to study a master degree in your university next semester. I would like to inquiry some information as to studying in the university. 02br
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00First of all, I am concerned about the accommodation situation there. I heard about students could either chose live in the campus or off the campus. Could you please inform me the difference between the two options, particularly in terms of rent, as well as the application requirements?02br
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00Second, the tuition fees is quite a big amount of money to me. I want to know whether the university offers scholarship to international students and what maximum amount it is.02br
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00Finally, I am wondering whether I am eligible to go on pursuing a PHD degree after obtaining the master certificate in your university.02br
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00These are all the things I want to clarify now. Could you please be kind enough t provide me with the relevant information? Your prompt response will be highly appreciated.02br
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00Yours faithfully, 02br
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00Joe0-
  

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0 Hi Anon,02br 02br 00Good letter. I have changed some mistakes and edited your letter a bit. Don't forget to tell them what you're actually planning to study.

  • 0 Hi Anon,02br 02br 00Good letter.
  • I have changed some mistakes and edited your letter a bit.
  • Don't forget to tell them what you're actually planning to study.
  • Good luck!
  • 05002br 02br 00Best wishes,02br 00NewPhilologist01blockquote 01cite 10Anonymous12cite 12br 10Dear Sir/Madam,12br 12br 12br 12br 10I am a Chinese student who would like to pursue a master's degree in 11b 10Law?
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0 Hi Anon,02br
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00Good letter. I have changed some mistakes and edited your letter a bit. Don't forget to tell them what you're actually planning to study. Good luck! 05002br
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00Best wishes,02br
00NewPhilologist01blockquote
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10Dear Sir/Madam,12br

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This is with reference to my transfer to kalicut

I would like to remind you that this is my 3rd transfer within 1 year, I am not able to understand why are you transfering me so frequently , these transfers effecting my sales performance as bell as my family life.

now you are transferring me in the month of august, you have to understand that my son is studying in clas

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