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Pleas can you help me with my CV?

0I did my CV a year ago...I think that it could be better. Pleas can you look at it and also corect my grammer? Thank you very much. 02br
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00Ing. Lukas Vavrecka 02br
00Krasov 223, 02br
00793 94 Krasov, 02br
00Czech Republic 02br
00Tel: +420-777861652 02br
00e-mail: 01span00Email Removed02span02br
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00PERSONAL DATA 02br
00Born: 08-27-1980 02br
00Place of birth: Krnov 02br
00Country: Czech Republic 02br
00Nationality: Czech Republic 02br
00Marital status: single 02br
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00EDUCATION 02br
00September 2004 – Now : PhD. student in Heat Transfer and Fluid Flow Laboratory - www.heatlab.cz on Technical University of Brno, Faculty of Technical Engineering 02br
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00September1999 – June 2004: Master’s degree at Technical University of Brno, Faculty of Technical Engineering 02br
00Field of Study: Biological Mechanic with diploma thesis theme: Deformation – stress analysis of proximal part of femur with total endoprothesis 02br
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00WORK EXPERIENCE 02br
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00August 2003- Now: Heat Transfer and Fluid Flow Laboratory, Technical University of Brno, Czech rep. Technician and project engineer – My duties are prepare experiments, analyze results, design and construct new experimental stands, make thermal and stress analysis in FEA system ANSYS 02br
00June 2002-September 2002: Holiday Inn, Sunspree resort, Corpus Christi, Texas, USA 02br
00 Housekeeper 02br
00June – July 2001, 2000, 1999: Patria Kobyli, Kobyli,Czech Republic 02br
00 Peach gatherer 02br
00July 2001-August 2001: Michael's Bakery, Prague, Czech Republic 02br
00 Cook Helper 02br
00 SS Service, Brno, Czech Republic 02br
00 Construction Worker/Moving Assistant 02br
00 KFC - Fast Food, Brno, Czech Republic 02br
00 Cook/Waiter 02br
00July 2000-August 2000: Trans Technik, Brno, Czech Republic 02br
00 Warehouse Packer 02br
00July 1999-August 1999: TILIA Sawmill, Bruntal, Czech Republic 02br
00 Joiner/Painter 02br
00June 1998-August 1998: Zator Grade School, Zator, Czech Repulic 02br
00 Maintenance crew 02br
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00ACHIEVEMENTS 02br
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00LANGUAGE SKILLS: Native: Czech , Proficient in English, Know basic German. 02br
00COMPUTER SKILLS: Windows 3.1 and ‘95/‘98/’2000 and higher, Microsoft Office Suite (Word, Excel, PowerPoint, etc.), MS Publisher, Adobe Photoshop,, E-Mail, and the Internet (World Wide Web), construction programs – AutoCAD, Catia, ProENGINEER, Autodesk Inventor, FEA system ANSYS 02br
00OTHER SKILLS: welding, drilling, basic work with lathe, working in height, driving licence 02br
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00INTERESTS 02br
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00Travelling, mountain biking, playing sports, reading books, music, body-building, handy making, motorbikes, hill climbing, outdoor activities. 0-
  

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0Overall, it looks good, Lukas. I have minimized or eliminated items which should not be included because they are very basic or not applicable to the skills you want to sell now: 02br 02br 02br 02br 02br 00Ing. cz at Technical University of Brno, Faculty of Technical Engineering 02br 02br 00September 1999 – June 2004: Master’s degree at Technical University of Brno, Faculty of Technical Engineering.

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  • 0Overall, it looks good, Lukas.
  • I have minimized or eliminated items which should not be included because they are very basic or not applicable to the skills you want to sell now: 02br 02br 02br 02br 02br 00Ing.
  • cz at Technical University of Brno, Faculty of Technical Engineering 02br 02br 00September 1999 – June 2004: Master’s degree at Technical University of Brno, Faculty of Technical Engineering.
  • Field of study: Biological Mechanics with the diploma thesis topic of 'Deformation–stress analysis of proximal part of femur with total endoprothesis'.
  • 02br 02br 02br 00WORK EXPERIENCE 02br 02br 00August 2003- Present: Heat Transfer and Fluid Flow Laboratory, Technical University of Brno, Czech Republic: Technician and project engineer.
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0Overall, it looks good, Lukas. I have minimized or eliminated items which should not be included because they are very basic or not applicable to the skills you want to sell now: 02br
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00Ing. Lukas Vavrecka 02br
00Krasov 223, 02br
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0 Thank you very much for your notes. And I have smal additional question - Should I mention about some conferences where I have had some contribution?The of the conference was ENGINEERING MECHANICS 2005 in Svratka, Czech rep. If yes, how could I add it to my CV.. 0-
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0Yes, indeed, the conference should be included-- also seminars, training programs. Put it either under 'Achievements' or, if you have several items, make a section called 'Professional Activities". 0-
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0Hallo, thank you very much for your help, I really appreciate it. This way my CV looks much better. And I have made some small further changes in my CV, could you please look if it is fine as well? 02br
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00Ing. Lukas Vavrecka 02br
00Krasov 223, 02br
00793 94 Krasov, 02br
00Czech Republic 02br
00Tel: +420-777861652 02br
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0I've made a few small changes, Lukas. You changed some of my previous changes back to your original way, so I have changed them again. I really don't like doing this twice! If you want this to be correct, please leave them as I've written them. Also, leave the spacing as I have set it. 02br
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00Ing. Lukas Vavrecka 02br
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