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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Pleaase help me!

I really need to know wheather my grammer is correct or no?

I think it's a female zebra spider (Salticus scenicus), since it has really large eyes in the front in order to spot the prey and uses its jumping ability to capture it. This kind of spider is usually black covered with white stripes. The most interesting thing about the zebra spiders, which amaze me, their awareness of the observing viewer (or of being observed is better?). Thus, if you take a close look of one of them, it will lift its head as a respond and look straight back at you, which is obvious in both pictures you took!
  

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A quick edit gives this: I think it's a female zebra spider (Salticus scenicus) [no comma] since it has really large eyes in the front in order to spot the prey and uses its jumping ability to capture prey [repeated 'it' is ambiguous] . This kind of spider is usually black and covered with white stripes. The most interesting thing about the zebra spiders, which amaze s me, is their awareness of being observed .

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  • A quick edit gives this: I think it's a female zebra spider (Salticus scenicus) [no comma] since it has really large eyes in the front in order to spot the prey and uses its jumping ability to capture prey [repeated 'it' is ambiguous] .
  • This kind of spider is usually black and covered with white stripes.
  • The most interesting thing about the zebra spiders, which amaze s me, is their awareness of being observed .
  • Thus, if you take a close look of at one of them, it will [removing will works better with the 'and' later on] lift s its head as a respond in response and look s straight back at you --- which is obvious in both pictures you took!
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A quick edit gives this:

I think it's a female zebra spider (Salticus scenicus) [no comma] since it has really large eyes in the front in order to spot the prey and uses its jumping ability to capture prey [repeated 'it' is ambiguous]. This kind of spider is usually black and covere
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