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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
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00PLANING DEPARTMENT02br
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00 00 0003/02/200702br
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00To The Attention of Miss Waters 02br
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00Re: Coffee Shop with seating area at.02br
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00 0013 Broadway Newhaw00 02br
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00Dear Miss Waters,02br
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00As I mentioned on the phone. I interested to rent the shop above address, I am planning to open a coffee shop in this premises. 02br
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00Major of food will be prepared to minimize to coking on the premises. I am enclosing a menu sample for you to consider.02br
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00Would you please look into it let me know as soon as you possibly can. 02br
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00I would be very grateful for you effort and your help 02br
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02br 02br 00RUNNYMEDE BOROUGH COUNCIL 02br 02br 01font 00PLANNING02font 00 DEPARTMENT02br 02br 00Civic Offices 02br 02br 00Station Road 02br 02br 00Addlestone 02br 02br 00Surrey 02br 02br 00 03/02/200702br 02br 01font 00For the attention of02font 00 Miss Waters 02br 02br 00Re: Coffee Shop with seating area at 01font 0013 Broadway, Newhaw, Surrey02font 02br 02br 00Dear Miss Waters,02br 02br 00As I mentioned on the 01font 00phone, I am interested in renting the shop at the02font 00 above address. I am planning 01font 00on opening02font 00 a coffee shop in this premises. 02br 02br 01font 00The majority of food will be pre-prepared to minimize the cooking02font 00 on the premises.

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  • 02br 02br 00RUNNYMEDE BOROUGH COUNCIL 02br 02br 01font 00PLANNING02font 00 DEPARTMENT02br 02br 00Civic Offices 02br 02br 00Station Road 02br 02br 00Addlestone 02br 02br 00Surrey 02br 02br 00 03/02/200702br 02br 01font 00For the attention of02font 00 Miss Waters 02br 02br 00Re: Coffee Shop with seating area at 01font 0013 Broadway, Newhaw, Surrey02font 02br 02br 00Dear Miss Waters,02br 02br 00As I mentioned on the 01font 00phone, I am interested in renting the shop at the02font 00 above address.
  • I am planning 01font 00on opening02font 00 a coffee shop in this premises.
  • 02br 02br 01font 00The majority of food will be pre-prepared to minimize the cooking02font 00 on the premises.
  • 02font 02br 02br 00Would you please look into it 01font 00and02font 00 let me know as soon as you possibly can.
  • 02br 02br 00I would be very grateful for 01font 00your help.
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0Your letter doesn't say there will be no cooking, it says there will be some cooking ('minimise the cooking' means that there will be a small amount of cooking).02br
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