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Angliholic Posted 15 years ago
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Play the device in an amusement park

Jack wanted to play the device in an amusement park.

Hi,

Does the above sound right to you? Is it better to revise it as the following? Thanks.

Jack wanted to go on a ride of the devices in an amusement park.
  

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-- No. it is unintelligible. Use this: Jack wanted take one of the rides in an amusement park.

— Mister Micawber

  • -- No.
  • it is unintelligible.
  • Use this: Jack wanted take one of the rides in an amusement park.
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Jack wanted to play the device in an amusement park.-- No. it is unintelligible. Use this:

Jack wanted take one of the rides in an amusement park.
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