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Sara1338 Posted 13 years ago
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planning my coursework. Is is correct?
During 4 visits I decided to focus on physical play considering that Oliver loves playing outdoors and fine motor activities such as drawing or painting. He enjoys running, riding a bike, kicking and throwing a ball, etc. I am planning to concentrate on gross motor skills as well as on fine motor skills.
I want to concentrate on Oliver's gross motor skills during two of 4 visits. I am planning to carry out some fine motor activities for other two visits.
Physical play includes activities that use physical movements to allow children to use their energy, and it gives children the chance to develop gross and fine motor skills, learn new things and socialize. Physical play also benefits a child's health. Understanding the importance of physical play is vital to child's development.
I would like to do a research why physical play is so extremely important and meaningful for child’s development.
I want to concentrate on Oliver's gross motor skills during two of 4 visits. I am planning to carry out some fine motor activities for other two visits.
Physical play includes activities that use physical movements to allow children to use their energy, and it gives children the chance to develop gross and fine motor skills, learn new things and socialize. Physical play also benefits a child's health. Understanding the importance of physical play is vital to child's development.
I would like to do a research why physical play is so extremely important and meaningful for child’s development.
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Oliver loves playing outdoors—he enjoys running, riding a bike, and kicking and throwing a ball— and also fine motor activities such as drawing or painting. Therefore, during four visits, I decided to focus on physical play. I am planning to examine both gross and fine motor skills: I want to concentrate on Oliver's gross motor skills during two of the four visits and on his fine motor activities during the other two visits.
- Oliver loves playing outdoors—he enjoys running, riding a bike, and kicking and throwing a ball— and also fine motor activities such as drawing or painting.
- Therefore, during four visits, I decided to focus on physical play.
- I am planning to examine both gross and fine motor skills: I want to concentrate on Oliver's gross motor skills during two of the four visits and on his fine motor activities during the other two visits.
- Physical play includes activities that involve physical movements, allowing children to use their energy while giving them the chance to develop motor skills, learn new things, and socialize; it also benefits their health.
- Understanding the importance of physical play is vital to assisting a child's development.
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Oliver loves playing outdoors—he enjoys running, riding a bike, and kicking and throwing a ball— and also fine motor activities such as drawing or painting. Therefore, during four visits, I decided to focus on physical play. I am planning to examine both gross and fine motor skills: I want to concentrate on Oliver's gross motor skills during two of the four visits and on his fine motor activities
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