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Vame1 Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Placement Of Participle

Does putting a participle after a noun make it more formal?

"The number of unemployed people will likely rise."
"The number of people unemployed will likely rise."

Or is it wrong or awkward?
  

Top answer

The second sentence sounds weird to me. & I would say unemployed persons instead of unemployed people.

  • The second sentence sounds weird to me.
  • & I would say unemployed persons instead of unemployed people.
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The second sentence sounds weird to me.
& I would say unemployed persons instead of unemployed people.
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Both sentence structures are acceptable.
vame1"The number of unemployed people will likely rise."
This emphasis on the word people.
vame1"The number of people unemployed will likely rise."
While this sentence focus on unemployed a little more.

It really dependents on what you are typing to emphasis while writing. I
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Does putting a participle after a noun make it more formal? Perhaps a little.

"The number of unemployed people will likely rise."
"The number of people unemployed will likely rise."

Or is it wrong or awkward? It's fine, but less common.


The second sentence sounds

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