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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Placement of one part of the sentence

Hello!
Have I structured this sentence correctly? Especially, is the underlined part in the correct place?

Throughout the academic year of 2014/2015 in the prisons it is possible to participate in general and professional educational programmes.

Thank you!
  

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I would place the underlined part at the end of the sentence, making it more closely associated with the programs and less with the year.

— Philip

  • I would place the underlined part at the end of the sentence, making it more closely associated with the programs and less with the year.
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I would place the underlined part at the end of the sentence, making it more closely associated with the programs and less with the year.
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Throughout the academic year of 2014/2015, in the prisons it is possible to participate in general and professional educational programmes.
This is OK if the reader knows what prisons you are talking about.

I prefer this version.
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