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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
Letter Writing

Pl Validate the covering letter for any gramatical mistakes

Hi Friends, Following is the covering letter written for one position. Could some one check this one for gramatical mistakes as well as for improvements in any respect, if any.. . Thank you for your help.

Present:
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I, certified software auditor (CSA), currently work for ABC in Norwalk, NY as a Quality Analyst. As a QA, I am responsible for developing test strategy, test plans, traceability matrices, execution of test plans, validating defects, producing defect reports and conducting triage meetings every day.

Previous:
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As you will notice in the enclosed resume, I have experience working in various capacities such as QA,Business Analyst, Project lead, and Programmer/Analyst. As a Business Analyst, I have experience in gathering Business requiremts through JAD sessions. I have successfully managed remote development teams of 12 people in the recent past as an onsite technical project leader. I am well versed in developing complex IBM mainframe applications using SDLC methodologies. I have several Years of experience working with CMM Level 5 Processes and performed process audits as an Internal software auditor.

Character:
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For the past twenty,I have been consistently exceeding the expectations of my clients and as a result achieved several awards. I am an organized, flexible individual, with a keen eye for details and I am able to back this up with references from my clients. On top of everything, I have a very positive attitude.

Expectation:
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I believe my analytical, technical, leadership skills are a strong match for this position. I thank you in advance for your consideration, and I look forward to hearing from you soon.
  

Top answer

It's unusual to divide a letter into headed sections in this way. You don't need to put a heading for each paragraph, just try to make your letter flow naturally. It's a good idea to start off by telling them exactly what you are applying for.

  • It's unusual to divide a letter into headed sections in this way.
  • You don't need to put a heading for each paragraph, just try to make your letter flow naturally.
  • It's a good idea to start off by telling them exactly what you are applying for.
  • At the moment, they will have no idea why you are writing this letter.
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It's unusual to divide a letter into headed sections in this way. You don't need to put a heading for each paragraph, just try to make your letter flow naturally.

It's a good idea to start off by telling them exactly what you are applying for. At the moment, they will have no idea why you are writing this letter.
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Nona The Brit
It's unusual to divide a letter into headed sections in this way. You don't need to put a heading for each paragraph, just try to make your letter flow naturally.

Ok, got you..
Nona The Brit
It's a good idea to start off by telling them exactly what you are applying for. At the moment, they will have no i
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An email subject line doesn't really count as part of the letter in the same way that a subject line in a paper letter does (I think, anyway). It's common to repeat the information in the email.

Anyway, it just creates a nice natural start to your letter even if it were a paper letter.
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Ok, Got you..

Do you have any other comments on the grammer or on the style of the writing ? Any suggestions that adds a value to the letter are highly welcome..

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