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Safeer Posted 18 years ago
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pl check my eng to correct

I want a girl is cooking good and her knowledge. I will engage to be married to her. Shanti helps me to get the job good. I have already applied my Resume to her enable India office with disability. If I will get a job then my one month will pay salary to her. I will get it after 2 months. I want a new SIM card for message free. Do you know which SIM card is the best of message free? I will donate for you. Do you want anything specialist? Don’t disturb you to call to vibrate my mobile. I sent a message to Sajeer for no reply. Thank you very much for helping my English improved. I am always writing the sentence English to send website at English forums to correct it. I need to practice to be learned. I couldn’t read the bible but I have hidden it. I received railway recruitment cell by post but I didn’t like to go to Mumbai for an interview. I got my passport. I could my shake hand to other people but I don’t talk sign language to them. I am boring to look nothing in the marriage. Tank is dirty. I will brush it to be cleaned with water. I want to marry in age is 30. My passport will send to me by post. I will write sign and take it and pay Rs 20 to postman. You improved good your English than me. I am in the bus to sit to have dream nothing. I want to chat to you from Google talk. I think you don’t like to chat with me. As per the order from government that all bike riders must wear the helmet. Violation of this rule will be imposed a fine of Rs 100.
  

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Hi Safeer, I think that no-one wants to reply because you have too may sentences here. It's also very confusing when you don't write ech sentence on a separate line. It makes it hard to read.

  • Hi Safeer, I think that no-one wants to reply because you have too may sentences here.
  • It's also very confusing when you don't write ech sentence on a separate line.
  • It makes it hard to read.
  • I'm just going to correct your first one..
  • I want a girl is cooking good and her knowledge.
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Hi Safeer,

I think that no-one wants to reply because you have too may sentences here. It's also very confusing when you don't write ech sentence on a separate line. It makes it hard to read.

I'm just going to correct your first one..

I want a girl is cooking good and her knowledge. I want a girl who can cook well and who has good knowledge.

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