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These pie charts shows proportion of journey made in the Netherland according to transport type: car, train, bicyle and other public transport in 1975 and 2000.

Overall, car traffic is the only transport type which its proportion of journey increased.

In 1795, train traffic was the most common transport type in the Netherland which contributed the largest proportion of journey around 35 percent. Car and bicycle also were the main transport types in this country with 25 percent and 23 percent respectively. While other just made 5 percent of journey.

In 2000,we see the increase in proportion of journey car made with almost 75 percent. This put car traffic on the top of these transport type. Train became the second popular type with 15 percent while this bicycle's proportion was 6 percent and other's was 4 percent.

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The pie charts illustrate the proportion of journeys in the year 1975 and 2000 made by all modes of transport in the Netherlands.

Overall, comparison has been made between the year 1975 and year 2000 to show the change in transportation over the years.

As the graphs depict, the former graph demonstrates that car, train and bicycle were used for transportation equally by the people with each 30% contribution in 1975. Whereas, the latter graph shows 75% of cars, 15% of trains, 10% of bicycle were used by the people in 2000.

When we compare both the years, 75% people started travelling by car in 2000 while cars were used for about 25% in 1975. Fewer people used Trains in 2000 when compared to 1975. There is a reduction in the use of bicycles with 30% in 1975 and 10% in 2000. However, public transport was used at 5% in each year 1975 and 2000.

Pie Chart 1. Plz, someone help me correct this description. Many thanks.

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