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Londonderry Posted 10 years ago
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Physical Measurements

Hello,

I have a question about the way height and weight should be written.

Max Davis is 6 feet 5 inches tall.
He is a 6-foot 5-inch athlete.

Francene's baby weighed 12 pounds 5 ounces at birth.
Francene's gave birth to a 12-pound 5-ounce baby girl.

I'm thinking that the hyphenated modifiers are okay as written (i.e., with just two hyphens). I also think that there should be no commas in any of my examples. Do you agree? I thank you very, very much!
  

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There seems to be many discussions on this with no "definitive" answer. CMS is apparently silent on the issue. There seems to be three schools of thought: Your way Something like "a six-foot-five athlete" (no one would say "inches" there - it's understood) or a 12-pound-5-ounce baby (which is freaking enormous!

  • There seems to be many discussions on this with no "definitive" answer.
  • CMS is apparently silent on the issue.
  • There seems to be three schools of thought: Your way Something like "a six-foot-five athlete" (no one would say "inches" there - it's understood) or a 12-pound-5-ounce baby (which is freaking enormous!
  • " I don't really like any of them - using it all as a modifier is pretty clumsy.
  • " (By the way, you forgot to delete the 's after Francene in your fourth sentence).
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There seems to be many discussions on this with no "definitive" answer. CMS is apparently silent on the issue.

There seems to be three schools of thought:
  • Your way
  • Something like "a six-foot-five athlete" (no one would say "inches" there - it's understood) or a 12-pound-5-ounce baby (which is freaking enormous! - I assume Francene had a c-section)
  • Using the comma,
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Oops! I did. (Typo.)

Thank you very much for your response-- appreciated!

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