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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Phrasing in a list

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Am I phrasing this correctly?

Please report these issues in the following manner:

1. in person during business days from 9:30 to 19:00 (11 Fox Street, Walden),

2. by calling phone number XXXXXXX or our helpline YYYYYYY,

3. by sending a submission via mail (11 Fox Street, Walden) or electronically submitted online form at www.XXXX.com.

Thank you!.
  

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Please report these issues by either: in the following manner: 1. calling in person during business days from 9:30 to 19:00 (11 Fox Street, Walden), or 2. by calling phone number XXXXXXX or our helpline YYYYYYY, or 3.

  • Please report these issues by either: in the following manner: 1.
  • calling in person during business days from 9:30 to 19:00 (11 Fox Street, Walden), or 2.
  • by calling phone number XXXXXXX or our helpline YYYYYYY, or 3.
  • com.
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Please report these issues by either: in the following manner:

1. calling in person during business days from 9:30 to 19:00 (11 Fox Street, Walden), or

2. by calling phone number XXXXXXX or our helpline YYYYYYY, or

3. by sending a submission via mail (11 Fox Street, Walden) or electronically submitted

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