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Thelordoftherings.ca Posted 23 years ago
Grammar

Phrasing an essay,story or poem question.

I am in the process of creating a question to ask for a writing contest.

Question:

One of Tolkien’s themes from The Lord of The Rings is Test of True Friendship, Nature vs. Industrialism, sacrifice as the vehicle for transformation, and even the smallest and insignificant people can make a difference.

In essay or story form, include the major themes and how, in the end, caused good to over come evil. You may include other themes, but focus mainly on the above.

In Poem form, include the above themes in your work.

what would you change about the above statement?
  

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Mmm... " I may be wrong, though; but anyway... Hope this helps!

  • Mmm...
  • " I may be wrong, though; but anyway...
  • Hope this helps!
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Mmm... I would change:

"In essay or story form, include major themes and how, in the end, caused good to over come evil..."

to:

"In an essay or story style, include major themes and how, in the end, good overcame evil..."

And:

"In Poem form..."

to:

"In a poem style/form..."

I may be wrong, though; but anyway...
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Can a poem be created with the question I have, though?

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