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Christine Christie Posted 5 years ago
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Is this paragraph correct:


"In his way home, it occurred to Peter to go the beach, but he also remembered the incident of the day before, so he decided to go home. Furthermore, at that moment, he didn’t feel like covering all the distance to the other side of the beach."


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Christine Christie Is this paragraph correct: No. " Christine Christie remembered the incident of the day before This is not wrong, and it might be better than the usual "remembered yesterday's incident" in the right setting. Christine Christie covering all the distance to the other side of the beach I can't tell what it means.

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  • Christine Christie Is this paragraph correct: No.
  • " Christine Christie remembered the incident of the day before This is not wrong, and it might be better than the usual "remembered yesterday's incident" in the right setting.
  • Christine Christie covering all the distance to the other side of the beach I can't tell what it means.
  • The other side of the beach can't be very far.
  • Either you start at the dunes and walk to the water, or vice-versa.
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Christine ChristieIs this paragraph correct:

No.

"On his way home …."

Christine Christieremembered the incident of the day before

This is not wrong, and it might be better than the usual "remembered yesterday's incident" in the right setting.

Christine Christiecovering all the dist
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