Hi, Guest Your first sentence is ok. I'd put the commas in different places, but I don't think that's a problem or that you really have to change them. " I've used the commas to separate "in reality" from the rest of the sentence because "in reality" is a sort of comment made by the speaker that does not add much to the meaning of the sentence.
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