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Makaannan Posted 16 years ago
Letter Writing

Phrase in an invitation

I have to write an invitation in which I ask the invitees to mark the date of the occasion on their calendar. Is there an classy way to do this in a formal invitation?

Something like this: Please mark the date of the inaugural festivities on your calendar.

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option no. 2 "Please do remember to mark the date on your calendar".

The question is does this sound cheesy or is there a better way?

BR Olav
  

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Both sound fine to me; neither sounds cheesy. The 2nd is informal, the 1st more formal.

  • Both sound fine to me; neither sounds cheesy.
  • The 2nd is informal, the 1st more formal.
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Both sound fine to me; neither sounds cheesy. The 2nd is informal, the 1st more formal.

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