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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Hi ,Is the sentence correctly phrased?
After a bitter break up, Kojek decides to go for a holiday in a secluded outdoor with his five friends. Known as being extremely frugal, he hires a run-down van and rents an accommodation in an even more run-down hostel. Much to their surprise, the hostel shows them the most terrifying moment of their lives, where they face their own deaths by a pair of hairpins stuck deeply into their ears.
After a bitter break up, Kojek decides to go for a holiday in a secluded outdoor with his five friends. Known as being extremely frugal, he hires a run-down van and rents an accommodation in an even more run-down hostel. Much to their surprise, the hostel shows them the most terrifying moment of their lives, where they face their own deaths by a pair of hairpins stuck deeply into their ears.
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"Outdoor" is an adjective, so there is not such thing as a secluded outdoor. There is not such thing as an outdoor. " Who are these people?
- "Outdoor" is an adjective, so there is not such thing as a secluded outdoor.
- There is not such thing as an outdoor.
- " Who are these people?
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"Outdoor" is an adjective, so there is not such thing as a secluded outdoor. There is not such thing as an outdoor.
At first you are writing about Kojek, but the third and fourth sentences refers to "their surprise" and "them" and "they." Who are these people?
At first you are writing about Kojek, but the third and fourth sentences refers to "their surprise" and "them" and "they." Who are these people?
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For "their surprise" and "them" and "they."- I’m referring to Kojek and his five friends. For Outdoor: Yes, Outdoor is an adjective. Therefore I used adverb to make the sentence more clear as “a secluded..
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You still have the adjective "outdoor" with no noun or pronoun for it to modify. Additionally, "a secluded" would modify the same noun or pronoun. "A secluded" is not an adverb.
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Anonymousin a secluded outdoor You have missed a word here.in a secluded outdoor location
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