Phd letter

0 Hello everbody i am a new member and this is my second message,so i salute you all, i have some problemes due to my poor english in writing a Phd motivation letter that i want to send directly to proffessors, i will be thankfull for your suggestions and i m sending you a letter that i have written and i need somone to see the corrections needed. thank you for this great space . 02br
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00The purpose of this letter is not only to 01i00describe my educational and professional background, but also to focus your attention on how motivated I am to start PhD programme in 02i00[]01i00 02i00offered by your laboratory at [].02br
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00I graduated with an00 Master's Research00 Degree00 in00 Computer Science, Telecommunication and Engineering00 from the National Higher School of Computer Science and Systems Analysis at Mohammed V00 University (the first engineering school in Morocco), in 2004 I obtained a 00Bachelor's00 in Computer Science 00at the faculty of science of Mohammed V00 University in Rabat and in 2002 I finished a university degree in Mathematics and physics in Mohammed I university in Oujda.02br
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00Actually I am working as a Networking engineer in Morocco Telecommunication after nearly 1 year in Alcatel-Lucent working as an Intelligent Networks Engineer at Moroccan R&D research centre, and I am preparing myself to pursue a PhD in []. 02br
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00The master of research I’ve studied was a preparation for multidisciplinary research, based on physics, electronics, mathematical, and computational background. We were introduced to gain insight into research works in several topics of engineering; information theory, telecommunication and other fields. And I was always capable of providing an intense effort of adaptation and learning to successfully manipulate new notions and techniques. 02br
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00I am Aware of the challenge represented by choosing [] in terms of need for adaptation to new tools and manners of research; however I believe in my ability and will to point my scientific background and experience in such a multidisciplinary and promising research area, a choice that fits best my objectives and ambitions. 02br
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00As [] University has important research activities in this area, I would like to be given the opportunity to be one of its prestigious research groups. I am sure that my passion to computer science related research fields, along with my skills, knowledge and competence would make me a valuable member of your research team, Hence I would appreciate if you consider my application for developing a PhD under your supervision.02br
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00I am at your service for further information and clarifications, and I look forward to hearing from you.0-