Phd cover letter, Plz help

thanks in advance for any help and comments, I'm not good in writing, Plz check it for me.

Here it's my cover letter:

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On recommendation of Prof. xxx, polytechnic of xxx, I am writing to you in order to apply for the PhD-program you are offering.

As per my CV, I have been working on my thesis entitled, “Scan-chain testing through SBST algorithm” in order to obtain the degree MSc in Electronic engineering “Embedded systems” from polytechnic of xxx, In March 2013. Testing, dependable and configurable systems design are my particular areas of interests and inspired me to conduct my research activities in a similar field. After finishing the first batch experiment in testing field, I have continued working in testing and dependable systems design area. I found myself very interested in this field and possess good knowledge in the entire procedure, debugging and designing, as well as excellent laboratory skills. Before beginning my thesis work, I conducted an investigation on memory unit testing where my entire work was highly appreciated.

Along with other knowledge on dependability issues Beside excellent literature searching and sorting skills learned from highly skilled professionals at polytechnic of xxx, working at CAD “Computer aided design and testing group of xxx” gave me adorable skills and knowledge in many related SWs and applications.

After reading the advertisement, it seems to me that this is an appropriate position, one that I have been looking and waiting for. I am confident that I am the suitable candidate for the position. I have considered the stipend, and nevertheless, would gladly consider the position, since the research theme fits my interests perfectly.

In summary, as the Department of electronic and information, has important research activities in these areas; I would like to have the opportunity to develop its PhD program in this project. I am confident I have the skills, knowledge and competence required. Please don’t hesitate to contact me for further queries, if you have any.

Thank you very much for considering my application and I look forward to hearing from you.""