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Ben9108 Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

Phases followed by due to

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By extensive review, the final proposal was to delete the air conditioner in the design due to non-essential air conditioning in the lobby and having a chance of implementation of energy saving.

  

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Hi - After extensive review, the final proposal did not include the air conditioner as part of the design. It was not thought essential to have that air conditioning in the lobby. That option, not having the air conditioner, may also make significant savings on energy costs Dave

  • Hi - After extensive review, the final proposal did not include the air conditioner as part of the design.
  • It was not thought essential to have that air conditioning in the lobby.
  • That option, not having the air conditioner, may also make significant savings on energy costs Dave
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- After extensive review, the final proposal did not include the air conditioner as part of the design. It was not thought essential to have that air conditioning in the lobby. That option, not having the air conditioner, may also make significant savings on energy costs

Dave

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