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Ben9108 Posted 18 years ago
Letter Writing

Phase work recommendation

1font01i00I would be grateful if someone could help to comment my letter as below. Many Thanks02i02font02br
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00Dear Client02br
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00We enclosed herewith a revised quotation for your approval. 02br
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00In brief, the scope of work in phase I shown in the revised quotation, four existing00 00diameter 00 fans will be replaced in diameter 00 new fans. Technically, the improvement works shall be achieved 71 % of the actual total flow rate demand (00/s) of the ABC room accordingly. 02br
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00In order to prevent any interruption of service normal operation, addition of extra air conditioner of phase II are highly recommended to be implemented sooner rather than later.02br
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00Officer02br
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02br 02br 00Dear01b 00 Mr [surname],02b 02br 02br 02br 00We 01b 00enclose02b 00 herewith a revised quotation for your approval. 02br 02br 00In brief, the scope of work in01b 00 Phase 02b 00I shown in the revised quotation01b 00 is that (the) 02b 00four existing00 01b 00200mm-diameter02b 00 fans will be replaced01b 00 by new 600mm-diameter02b 00 fans. 02br 02br 00Officer0-

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  • 02br 02br 00Dear01b 00 Mr [surname],02b 02br 02br 02br 00We 01b 00enclose02b 00 herewith a revised quotation for your approval.
  • 02br 02br 00In brief, the scope of work in01b 00 Phase 02b 00I shown in the revised quotation01b 00 is that (the) 02b 00four existing00 01b 00200mm-diameter02b 00 fans will be replaced01b 00 by new 600mm-diameter02b 00 fans.
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00In brief, the scope of work in01b00 Phase 02b00I shown in the revised quotation01b00 is that (the) 02b00
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