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Pharmacist
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Self-Introduction
My name is Thomas. I’m a Cancer. I’m an active, out-going, and hard-working person. I like to sing, listen to music, and surf on the Internet in my free time. I have two hobbies. For one thing, I love drawing. I often draw Disney characters which I like. During this progress, I can master the skills of drawing. For another thing, I love playing the recorder. It is a kind of instrument that is similar to flute. I first learnt to play it when I was in elementary school, and I got the highest score in our class when I was in 6th grade.
My friends say that I am a very funny and an interesting boy with a good sense of humor. As soon as I meet new people who are happy to meet me, I feel extremely comfortable with them. We exchange new ideas, find many interesting things about each other and experience new things. I appreciate friendship and people who surround me.
I can say that I am a responsible and a hard-working student. I enjoy my time at school. It is really nice to study and the students are very friendly and ready to help. I like to receive and deal with challenging tasks. I am a very enthusiastic student and I think this is a strong point of mine.
I’ve been attending classes in EGRC for nearly two years. During this time, I’ve learnt a lot of useful knowledge and new information. The most desirable thing that I would like to achieve currently is to pass the intermediate level of GEPT this year. Most importantly, I hope I can enter a prestigious senior high school next year.
I have a dream—to travel around the world. As a person, I’m always interested in understanding and seeing new things. Here are the reasons why I should travel:1. To get inspired. 2. To prove to myself that I can do it. 3. To see and experience different cultures. 4. To eat. 5. To meet new and interesting people.
The final objective of my career plan is to be a pharmacist in the future. The pharmacist is someone who can answer health-related questions and help people to stay as healthy as possible. Being a pharmacist is a trusted, caring, and knowledgeable health care professional.
Thanks for your attention!
Self-Introduction
My name is Thomas. I’m a Cancer. I’m an active, out-going, and hard-working person. I like to sing, listen to music, and surf on the Internet in my free time. I have two hobbies. For one thing, I love drawing. I often draw Disney characters which I like. During this progress, I can master the skills of drawing. For another thing, I love playing the recorder. It is a kind of instrument that is similar to flute. I first learnt to play it when I was in elementary school, and I got the highest score in our class when I was in 6th grade.
My friends say that I am a very funny and an interesting boy with a good sense of humor. As soon as I meet new people who are happy to meet me, I feel extremely comfortable with them. We exchange new ideas, find many interesting things about each other and experience new things. I appreciate friendship and people who surround me.
I can say that I am a responsible and a hard-working student. I enjoy my time at school. It is really nice to study and the students are very friendly and ready to help. I like to receive and deal with challenging tasks. I am a very enthusiastic student and I think this is a strong point of mine.
I’ve been attending classes in EGRC for nearly two years. During this time, I’ve learnt a lot of useful knowledge and new information. The most desirable thing that I would like to achieve currently is to pass the intermediate level of GEPT this year. Most importantly, I hope I can enter a prestigious senior high school next year.
I have a dream—to travel around the world. As a person, I’m always interested in understanding and seeing new things. Here are the reasons why I should travel:1. To get inspired. 2. To prove to myself that I can do it. 3. To see and experience different cultures. 4. To eat. 5. To meet new and interesting people.
The final objective of my career plan is to be a pharmacist in the future. The pharmacist is someone who can answer health-related questions and help people to stay as healthy as possible. Being a pharmacist is a trusted, caring, and knowledgeable health care professional.
Thanks for your attention!
Top answer
Self-introduction My name is Thomas. My zodiac sign is Cancer, and I am active and outgoing. I like to sing, listen to music, and surf the Internet.
- Self-introduction My name is Thomas.
- My zodiac sign is Cancer, and I am active and outgoing.
- I like to sing, listen to music, and surf the Internet.
- I have two hobbies , drawing and playing the recorder.
- I often sketch Disney characters and am mastering the skills of drawing.
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Self-introduction
My name is Thomas. My zodiac sign is Cancer, and I am active and outgoing. I like to sing, listen to music, and surf the Internet. I have two hobbies, drawing and playing the recorder. I often sketch Disney characters and am mastering the skills of drawing. I first learnt to play the recorder when I was in elementary school, and I got the highest score
My name is Thomas. My zodiac sign is Cancer, and I am active and outgoing. I like to sing, listen to music, and surf the Internet. I have two hobbies, drawing and playing the recorder. I often sketch Disney characters and am mastering the skills of drawing. I first learnt to play the recorder when I was in elementary school, and I got the highest score
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