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Vincent Teo Posted 16 years ago
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Peter's grandmother birthday
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Last Sunday evening, Peter held a birthday party with his family for his grandmother. She was wearing glasses with plain suits / outfits / clothes. Although she was 80 years old, she looked lively and strong. They invited many friends and relatives to her party.
The house was decorated with colourful ribbons and balloons. There were many varities of scrumptious food and a big vanilla cake on the table (which was made by his mother). When it was about / around 7.00 p.m., / 7.00p.m, Peter's uncles and aunts came with some presents. They greeted his gradmother a happy birthday.Some children played around outside. His grandmother was busy entertaning / entertained the guests. The party started to liven up when all the guests arrived.
They sang a birthday song to grandmother. She seemed pleased and enjoyable. She cut the cake into pieces and gave them to guests. After having tasty food, the children began playing / to play some fun / funny games. It was the happiest day for grandmother.
Last Sunday evening, Peter held a birthday party with his family for his grandmother. She was wearing glasses with plain suits / outfits / clothes. Although she was 80 years old, she looked lively and strong. They invited many friends and relatives to her party.
The house was decorated with colourful ribbons and balloons. There were many varities of scrumptious food and a big vanilla cake on the table (which was made by his mother). When it was about / around 7.00 p.m., / 7.00p.m, Peter's uncles and aunts came with some presents. They greeted his gradmother a happy birthday.Some children played around outside. His grandmother was busy entertaning / entertained the guests. The party started to liven up when all the guests arrived.
They sang a birthday song to grandmother. She seemed pleased and enjoyable. She cut the cake into pieces and gave them to guests. After having tasty food, the children began playing / to play some fun / funny games. It was the happiest day for grandmother.
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many varities They greeted his gradmother a happy birthday. She seemed pleased and enjoyable.
- many varities They greeted his gradmother a happy birthday.
- She seemed pleased and enjoyable.
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many varities
They greeted his gradmother a happy birthday.
She seemed pleased and enjoyable.
They greeted his gradmother a happy birthday.
She seemed pleased and enjoyable.
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Last monday,gautham celabrated his granmother's eightieth birtday.We celebrated in house hall.It was as happy as a king.
The party we invited relatives.We decorated house.We bursting the ballons.We cooked some tasty dishes.
We started with a cake cutting.The beautiful cake was chocolate flavoured.We sang the birtday song.Guests ate a delicious food.The food was fried chicken,noodle
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