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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Peter Pan synopsis

Hi, I have written a movie synopsis the title called Peter Pan.

Pease help me to correct of there is any mistakes, thank you.

Wendy and her brothers follow Peter Pan to a magical world of Neverland, a place where children never grow up. But while in Neverland they discover that family is the most important gift of all.
  

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Wendy and her brothers follow Peter Pan to the magical world of Neverland, where children never grow up. While in Neverland, they discover that a family is the most important gift of all.

— Mister Micawber

  • Wendy and her brothers follow Peter Pan to the magical world of Neverland, where children never grow up.
  • While in Neverland, they discover that a family is the most important gift of all.
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Wendy and her brothers follow Peter Pan to the magical world of Neverland, where children never grow up. While in Neverland, they discover that a family is the most important gift of all.
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Thank you. But I'm thinking of adding the word "two" like: Wendy and her two brothers.. what you say?
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Why do you think that might be a problem?
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I personally feel that it's sounds better with the word "two". More comprehend to me.
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You may insert any number you wish without fear or favour. This, for instance, is fine:

Wendy and her twenty-seven brothers...
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