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Never was John a dog owner because he didn't like the responsibility. Although he used to crave some pet, if they didn't give him much trouble to take care of, he would love to own one. He knew some body have gold fish or little turtles. The other day he saw a kid holding two tiny turtles on the train and gazed them for a while.

John and his friend Smith were riding to a water park somewhere in another city. Smith mentioned his dogs during the conversation while John attentively listened. He said he had two big dogs. Their weighs were about between 65 and 75 pounds. John thought they were darn big dogs. Then he asked whether they were male or females. Smith replied they both male dogs. Then it made him curious why he didn't have one male and female. He told him the reason while John was watching outside and enjoying the view. He mentioned his dogs constantly created friction between each other. John was laughing. They were fighting for his favorite. They fought to be the owner's favorite. John thought it was pretty interesting about what he said.

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Never was John a dog owner because he didn't like the responsibility. Although he used to crave some pet, if they didn't give him much trouble to take care of, he would love to own one. He knew some body have gold fish or little turtles.

  • Never was John a dog owner because he didn't like the responsibility.
  • Although he used to crave some pet, if they didn't give him much trouble to take care of, he would love to own one.
  • He knew some body have gold fish or little turtles.
  • The other day he saw a kid holding two tiny turtles on the train ?
  • and gazed them for a while.
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Never was John a dog owner because he didn't like the responsibility. Although he used to crave some pet, if they didn't give him much trouble to take care of, he would love to own one. He knew some body have gold fish or little turtles. The other day he saw a kid holding two tiny turtles on the train ? and gazed them for a while.

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DollNever was John a dog owner because he didn't like the responsibility. Although he used to want some pets, if they didn't give him much trouble to take care of, he would love to own one. He knew somebody had gold fish or little turtles. The other day he saw a kid holding two tiny turtles in a box on the train and look

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