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PreciousJones Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Persuade

I don't feel comfortable and can't persuade myself that I am spoiling you again and didn't teach you how to live your life.

Please proofread this sentence. Thank you.
  

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Hi, It's not wrong, but it is awkward, particularly because of the two and 's. I suggest you try to reword it into more than one sentence. Clive

— Clive

  • Hi, It's not wrong, but it is awkward, particularly because of the two and 's.
  • I suggest you try to reword it into more than one sentence.
  • Clive
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Hi,

It's not wrong, but it is awkward, particularly because of the two and's. . I suggest you try to reword it into more than one sentence.

Clive
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CliveHi,It's not wrong, but it is awkward, particularly because of the two and's. . I suggest you try to reword it into more than one sentence.Clive
The sentence doesn't seem to make sense to me.

Can't persuade myself that I am spoiling you...
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What is this sentence supposed to mean? Persuade myself that I am spoiling you again... Isn't it supposed to be I can't persuade myself to spoil you again...
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Hi,

What is this sentence supposed to mean? Persuade myself that I am spoiling you again...
I said it was awkward.
It suggests to me a context like this.
I used to do things that spoiled you.
Then I stopped.
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