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Antonija Posted 20 years ago
Vocabulary

personal touch

Hello,

Can you please check it?

You can choose a producer of the engine and its power, as well as colour and the materials for the interior and give a personal touch that makes you feel at home.

  

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How about: You can choose the engine manufacturer and power, ... interior to give your boat that personal touch to make make you feel at home. When I first read it, I thought you got to choose the power of the producer, which if course doesn't make any sense.

  • How about: You can choose the engine manufacturer and power, ...
  • interior to give your boat that personal touch to make make you feel at home.
  • When I first read it, I thought you got to choose the power of the producer, which if course doesn't make any sense.
  • But it still made me read it twice.
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How about:

You can choose the engine manufacturer and power, ... interior to give your boat that personal touch to make make you feel at home.

When I first read it, I thought you got to choose the power of the producer, which if course doesn't make any sense. But it still made me read it twice.
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Thanks for your corrections, Grammar Geek.

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