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Autominus Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing
Personal Statement (Profile)
Dear friends,
I would like to ask your help for some suggestions of my text. It would be great if any of you can indicate me to a better vision of the content or a better level of my English grammar, critics are really welcome as well. I will learn my errors from this cover letter I have done.
I hope this text won't have any grammar mistakes, and the sentences will be read smoothly in the end.
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A self-motivated, versatile and creative Computer Network Administrator with a background in computer science and research activities as well as solid expertise in enterprise IT environments, managing people as well as projects. Possesses a wide array of skills and specialized knowledge in the design, implementation, and maintenance of high-availability and fault-tolerant network architectures, using both wired and wireless connections. Also has hands-on experience in varied technical areas, including security, storage, backups, virtualization technology, and administration of Linux and Windows systems.
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Thank you in advance.
I would like to ask your help for some suggestions of my text. It would be great if any of you can indicate me to a better vision of the content or a better level of my English grammar, critics are really welcome as well. I will learn my errors from this cover letter I have done.
I hope this text won't have any grammar mistakes, and the sentences will be read smoothly in the end.
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A self-motivated, versatile and creative Computer Network Administrator with a background in computer science and research activities as well as solid expertise in enterprise IT environments, managing people as well as projects. Possesses a wide array of skills and specialized knowledge in the design, implementation, and maintenance of high-availability and fault-tolerant network architectures, using both wired and wireless connections. Also has hands-on experience in varied technical areas, including security, storage, backups, virtualization technology, and administration of Linux and Windows systems.
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Thank you in advance.
Top answer
You have not written a single grammatical sentence. Just some fragments that are rather lengthy.
- You have not written a single grammatical sentence.
- Just some fragments that are rather lengthy.
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You have not written a single grammatical sentence. Just some fragments that are rather lengthy.
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