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Time is money, and nobody sets out to waste it. At a core of business line its finance, how it allocates its resources to expand further. It is obviously a very delicate balance and this delicate balance requires a keen understanding of market trends and business need. I studied finance in my undergraduate studies because I have always been intrigued by the idea of money as a means to generate new resource. A Masters in finance will give me the proper knowledge about financial analysis, investment, development of finance etc. I need to create innovative and strategic financial plans for corporations in the future.

Since my school days, I have always been regarded as an academically brilliant. I have got GPA 5 in both secondary school certificate (SSC) and Higher secondary School certificate (HSC). This result is highest result in Bangladeshi educational system. My passion of accounting and finance led me to choose major in finance as the undergraduate program. I obtained a CGPA 3.60 on a scale of 4 in my Bachelor of business administration (BBA). My major is finance in BBA.. I have also obtained a CGPA 3.53 on a scale of 4 in my Masters of business administration (MBA) from Bangladesh University of professionals (BUP). My major is finance in MBA. But I think another post-graduation degree can help me to increase my knowledge on financial systems and financial management.

The movement towards a global economy and unprecedented explosion of free trade and exchange worldwide has bought about immense opportunities to develop newer tools, instruments and methodology in the field of finance. It is this challenging environment to which I intend to contribute by evolving meaningful and optimal solution to various problems of finance. My father and brother also have completed their graduation in finance. When I was a student of BBA I have invested some money in stock market. But I could not succeed because of the proper knowledge of finance. That time I could feel that if I can get better return of my invested money I should be learnt about financial system properly. This is another reason for choosing masters in finance. Without proper knowledge of finance lots of my friends also lose their investment. I want to develop my career in finance. To achieve my career goals, I need to learn much more about current development and techniques in financial markets and systems. I want to be a good CFO. So I think masters in finance help me to earn practical knowledge with theoretical knowledge. Because of if I have no enough knowledge on finance I cannot handle any kind of situation of financial systems and management. CFO is the heart of financial systems of a corporation so I can gather much knowledge on finance to help corporation strategy of finance.

A master degree will provide me with theoretical understanding an in depth idea of practical approaches in aiding managerial decision-making and analyzing skill to enable me to develop an expertise in the core areas of financial strategies ,systems and global corporate operations. I think a master degree will give me the tools I need to understand the cost of managing a business and teach me to recognize venture that will produce high return for business. Finance is very exciting field that combines understanding of market behavior with aspects of statistical modeling and prediction. I have always enjoyed this combination.

Maters of finance students in turkey are introduced to foundation theoretical framework based in corporate finance and financial market. Further study uncovers essential knowledge in the area of investment, bank financial management fixed income and corporate restructuring.