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Sunnyboy288 Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing
Personal statement help First Paragraph
Hi
I am a physician applying for Psychiatry residency
I am having trouble to phrase my 1st paragraph of personal statement
I was interested in Math and physics until I took up medicine. and interest in human mind and behaviour drew me into psychiatry.
To many, mentioning Math and Physics sounds quite wrong to mention. My true story is i was excellent at Math and Phys
But i also developed a liking for medicine and at the last moment, i decided it is better to take it to serve the humanity
CAn anyone help me in phrasing this into first paragraph of my Personal Statement
I am a physician applying for Psychiatry residency
I am having trouble to phrase my 1st paragraph of personal statement
I was interested in Math and physics until I took up medicine. and interest in human mind and behaviour drew me into psychiatry.
To many, mentioning Math and Physics sounds quite wrong to mention. My true story is i was excellent at Math and Phys
But i also developed a liking for medicine and at the last moment, i decided it is better to take it to serve the humanity
CAn anyone help me in phrasing this into first paragraph of my Personal Statement
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Everything you included other than this would be redundant (not necessary). This is how I would structure these two sentences: I have always been interested in math and physics but decided to persue a career in medicine. In particular, I am interested in the human mind and behaviour science which drew me into the field of psychiatry.
- Everything you included other than this would be redundant (not necessary).
- This is how I would structure these two sentences: I have always been interested in math and physics but decided to persue a career in medicine.
- In particular, I am interested in the human mind and behaviour science which drew me into the field of psychiatry.
- Of course, you can always add other pieces of information about yourself but this is a good starting point.
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Everything you included other than this would be redundant (not necessary). This is how I would structure these two sentences:
I have always been interested in math and physics but decided to persue a career in medicine. In particular, I am interested in the human mind and behaviour science which drew me into the field of psychiatry.
Of course, you can always add other pi
I have always been interested in math and physics but decided to persue a career in medicine. In particular, I am interested in the human mind and behaviour science which drew me into the field of psychiatry.
Of course, you can always add other pi
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