personal statement for university admission

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00My interest in bookkeeping dates back to age 14. I was elected as the class treasurer due to my excellent result in mathematics. I had chosen to study science stream when I entered form 4, but my interest in bookkeeping did not ends here. I decided to study accounts subject just to gratify myself. As a result, I managed to score an A in accounts for SPM without joining any account classes in school or even tuition classes.02br
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00Back to high school, I started to get involved in treasury work again by being elected as the treasurer of Resource Room Voluntary Service. Part of my position was to keep logs of the financial expenditures and gains and to create financial report for meetings. Fund raising program was one of the society annual activities. I analyzed the past report to plan out strategy and brought it up to the committee meeting. We set up booth during school events such as Sport Day and Award Day to sell T-shirts, key chains and hand held fans with the club logo printed on it. It was a successful fund raising program that funded nearly a thousand besides raising awareness of the public towards the needs of vision problem citizens in my country. 02br
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00The position as a treasurer sparked my interest for career in accounting. I realized accounting is an exciting field in which to be employed. I will get a deep insight into the economic world by pursuing a degree in accounting. Once I gave up my interest in accounting due to my parents’ high expectation on me to be a doctor. By seeing how the blind students in my school had worked hard to achieve their goals, I realized that I was a gifted child with normal eye sight and a healthy body, why should I give up my goal just to impress my parents. I strongly agree with Maxwell Maltz that “we find no real satisfaction or happiness in life without obstacles to conquer and goals to achieve.”02br
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