Personal statement for a TESOL Masters program. My writing is awful, please help me!

Here is my Personal Statement (to apply to a UK university). Hope you guys can take some time to check it out and give me some advice (This is my very first time and I know I'm bad at writing) MANY THANKS FOR HELPING ME. YOUR ADVICE WOULD BE HIGHLY USEFUL FOR ME!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/12hFqSpMDXxpWBqSEUKKzFz4F1vjdUhy0c8ESUYFPI3A/edit?usp=sharing

https://docs.google.com/document/d/12hFqSpMDXxpWBqSEUKKzFz4F1vjdUhy0c8ESUYFPI3A/edit?usp=sharing