Personal statement correction

Dear Professor,

Excellence in any sphere of life can be achieved through determination, hard work, perseverance and dedication. As I always have thirst of quality education and research work which made me most appealing to vat my expertise which can be utilized in the interest of my country and for the human beings of the world. Similarly on believing that continuous learning process can sharpen my research work and field, added in my mind the idea of exploration in the subject area and leads me for further innovation which exist in this field. Yet, lack of in depth knowledge of the subjects leaves the conceptual skills incomplete. It is in this context I would like to pursue a course that not only supplements the knowledge I possess but also provide a strong foundation to my research oriented studies.

Since my School days, I had been interested in Chemistry and new advanced Oxidation processes research. My scholastic record was meritorious right through school and higher secondary education. So I have done Pre-Medical in post-secondary education with in touch with chemistry. After completing my Bachelor’s education I took admission in top ranked university of KPK i.e. university of Peshawar Pakistan for Masters. My strong Penchant towards chemistry like organic, Inorganic, Physical, spectroscopy, nuclear, environmental & applied chemistry taught at bachelor’s and Master’s level and also the versatility of photochemistry and my basic interest in Inorganic chemistry motivated me to take chemistry as my majors in Master. During the course of study my encounters with chemistry, laboratory working skills, research discussions, report writing skills & data analysis have been extremely enlightening.

Presently I am completing MPhil from same prestigious Institute. . As master and MPhil student at ICS, UOP I worked with Dr. Nauman Ali (Ph.D. Inorganic chemistry from Kyungpook national university Korean) Assistant professor at chemistry institute university of Peshawar on heterogeneous Photo catalysis My inclination toward higher studies gained foot during the second year of MPhil, during which many people told me about the opportunities we have by doing Ph.D. and the fellowship research program offered by the various universities.

To achieve my objectives, I feel that the choice of university is of critical importance. Information from faculty, my seniors and perusal of university website, I have inferred that universities mention above provides excellent research activities and balanced academic program which is conducive to my study. I feel that I can realize my aspiration that I have nurtured along. As a part of family of your students, I have to imbibe the best of what you offer, extend the breadth of knowledge. Korea is the perfect place to study abroad.it is usually describes as one of the jewels due to its beauty, charm and rich history. With my background and interest, I plan to pursue Ph.D.in a truly professional and innovative environment. I have chosen Korea for my Ph.D. studies because of best academic facilities and cultural harmony among students from different countries. This environment allow me to adopt a scholarly approach and utilize my research abilities so as to materialize my research goals.

During my Undergraduate Studies I had actively participated in different international chemical society conferences held in our own campus and in other universities. I also had a strong interest in seminars, inter laboratory competition, social work, and sports competition.

Besides these I used to have a part-time job as a research assistant in between semester breaks and it had helped me to develop my communication skills, capacity to work under pressure, and disciplines in the workplace which become essential during my years in the university.