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Alemana Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing

Personal statement

Hello to everyone, could someone please check my personal statement for my CV? It is my first statement, so I am not sure if the third person form is appropriate?

Hardworking recent graduate with strong intercultural and analytical skills. Gained first experienced in XXX and XXX and took on responsibility in the independent conduction of projects. Looking to develop a career in an international environment where I can combine my financial knowledge with my interest in XYZ topics.

Thank you very much in advance.
  

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Alemana Hardworking recent graduate with strong intercultural and analytical skills. Gained first experienced in *** and *** and took on responsibility in the independent conduction of of doing projects independently . Looking to develop a career in an international environment where I can combine my financial knowledge with my interest in XY Z.

— Teechr

  • Alemana Hardworking recent graduate with strong intercultural and analytical skills.
  • Gained first experienced in *** and *** and took on responsibility in the independent conduction of of doing projects independently .
  • Looking to develop a career in an international environment where I can combine my financial knowledge with my interest in XY Z.
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AlemanaHardworking recent graduate with strong intercultural and analytical skills. Gained first experienced in *** and *** and took on responsibility in the independent conduction of of doing projects independently. Looking to develop a career in an international environment where I can combine my financial knowledge with my interest in XYZ.
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teechrGained first experienced in
It has to be "experience" right?

Thank you teechr!
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AlemanaIt has to be "experience" right?
Yes, it should. Thanks for pointing that out. See full correction below:
Gained first-hand experience in *** and *** and took ... etc.
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