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Sun 94 Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Personal statement
Hi! I am trying to write a personal statement for college admission. If you see any mistakes in the following sentence, can I have your comments? Thanks in advance.
.My mother has always emphasized the importance of an upright and dilligent life and encouraged mt to have a deep and honest discussion with other people. Therefore I always value honesty and this is way I am attracted to Accounting and Financing at XX University, the area in which honesty and accuracy plays a crucial role.
.My mother has always emphasized the importance of an upright and dilligent life and encouraged mt to have a deep and honest discussion with other people. Therefore I always value honesty and this is way I am attracted to Accounting and Financing at XX University, the area in which honesty and accuracy plays a crucial role.
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This is rather short for a personal statement.
- This is rather short for a personal statement.
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