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Essay & Composition Writing

Personal statement

If you see any problems in the following sentences , can I have your comments?

When you talk about your experience in your personal statement, you should focus more on one or two expereinces which reveal more about yourself. That is, rather than listing your expereinces, you should write about your experience that have to do with your present and future plans.
  

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Hi, If you see any problems in the following sentences , can I have your comments? When you talk about your experience in your personal statement, you should focus more on one or two exper ei nces spelling which reveal more about yourself. That is, rather than listing all your exper ei nces, you should write about those/the ones that have to do with your present and future plans.

  • Hi, If you see any problems in the following sentences , can I have your comments?
  • When you talk about your experience in your personal statement, you should focus more on one or two exper ei nces spelling which reveal more about yourself.
  • That is, rather than listing all your exper ei nces, you should write about those/the ones that have to do with your present and future plans.
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Hi,

If you see any problems in the following sentences , can I have your comments?

When you talk about your experience in your personal statement, you should focus more on one or two expereinces spelling which reveal more about yourself. That is, rather than listing all your expereinces, you should write about those/the ones that have

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