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00On February 2701sup00th02sup00, Tuesday, we went to interview XXXXXXX, a Holocaust survivor in order to commemorate her fascinating life story.02br
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00At 06:0001sup00PM02sup00, we arrived to her apartment. XXXX welcomed us warmheartedly and offered us some food and drinks. 02br
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00In order to remember the interview entirely, we used a tape-recorder. During the interview, we didn't need to ask XXXXX any questions about her journey and the interview progressed very smoothly.02br
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00The interview lasted about an hour. After the interview was ended, we asked her to lend us a few of her past pictures, and she happily accepted and gave us some pictures.02br
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00Eventually, we headed back to our houses gladsomely, with the feeling of learning something new.02br
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0On Tuesday, 27th February, we went to interview ***, a Holocaust survivor, in order to commemorate her fascinating life story. We arrived at her apartment at 6pm. 02br 02br 00In order to remember the interview in its entirety, we used a tape-recorder.

— Nona the brit

  • 0On Tuesday, 27th February, we went to interview ***, a Holocaust survivor, in order to commemorate her fascinating life story.
  • We arrived at her apartment at 6pm.
  • 02br 02br 00In order to remember the interview in its entirety, we used a tape-recorder.
  • During the interview, we didn't need to ask *** any questions about her (journey - odd word choice) and the interview progressed very smoothly.
  • The interview lasted about an hour.
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0On Tuesday, 27th February, we went to interview ***, a Holocaust survivor, in order to commemorate her fascinating life story. We arrived at her apartment at 6pm. *** welcomed us warmly and offered us some food and drinks.02br
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00My name is Genia Asher. I was born on October 601sup00th02sup00, 1931, in the town of Bilgoraj. I had two siblings: the firstborn, Abraham, and Moshe the youngest brother. I was 8 years old when the war started.02br
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