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Park train 88 Posted 8 years ago
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Personal details about english education

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"I want to become a teacher because I like to gain knowledge about many things and to share that knowledge with other people. I like to exchange opinions about the world with others and also I gain a sense of fulfillment when I feel that I could help others understand themselves and the world around them better.

I was teaching Japanese language to elementary and junior high school students in my homecountry, but I have not had an opportunity to teach Japanese children until now so I think this could a new and enlightening experience for both me and them.

When I have no classes I plan reading books and expanding my knowledge so that I can later share it with my students"

  

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"I want to become a teacher because I like to gain knowledge about many things and to share that knowledge with other people. I like to exchange opinions about the world with others and also I gain a sense of fulfillment when I feel that I could help others understand themselves and the world around them better. ) but I have not had an opportunity to teach Japanese children until now , so I think this could be a new and enlightening experience for both me and them.

  • "I want to become a teacher because I like to gain knowledge about many things and to share that knowledge with other people.
  • I like to exchange opinions about the world with others and also I gain a sense of fulfillment when I feel that I could help others understand themselves and the world around them better.
  • ) but I have not had an opportunity to teach Japanese children until now , so I think this could be a new and enlightening experience for both me and them.
  • When I have no classes I plan to read books and expand my knowledge so that I can later share it with my students .
  • "
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"I want to become a teacher because I like to gain knowledge about many things and to share that knowledge with other people. I like to exchange opinions about the world with others and also I gain a sense of fulfillment when I feel that I could help others understand themselves and the world around them better.

I was teaching the Japanese langu

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